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silly_cleo: Aww! I haven't seen any of the Sarah Jane Adventures, but I love the way you used Maria as an observer/narrator here - her shocked tone is so perfect!

minerva_fan: eeee Barbara/Ian! They're so articulate even when they're drunk. :)

rodlox: The backstory you created for the Rani during the Time War is intriguing, and I love the Doctor's hesitation right at the end. Nice work!

netgirl_y2k: Ha! The last line's beautiful, and I love how this manages to be poignant and funny all at once.

brewsternorth: I've never read the EDA in which Karl appears (spacing out on the title at the moment), but this was an excellent fic anyway, especially the Doctor's last line.

The Year of Intelligent Tigers by Kate Orman (

kateorman), and it's well worth a read if you can get hold of it.

Thankies!

dynapink: oh, I love this; it's a little hard and a little happy and just right for the two of them.

stunt_muppet: again, like I said - the fingernails. Brilliantly brilliant.

pimpmytardis: This is sweet and sad, and a pairing that works perfectly but that I'd never have thought of. Nice work!

starletfallen: I love the sense of what could have been here, the sense of potential between them.

dynapink: Oh, so sweet! Nice portrait of the post-Daleks' Invasion Earth, too.

rodlox: An interesting take on what might have happened on Traken - very sinister and foreboding. :)

Reposted for a typo.

stunt_muppet: Totally and fantastically brilliant!

minerva_fan: Aww! This is adorable in the extreme.

livii: I have seen a lot of Tegan episodes, but no Turlough yet, but now I really want to! Fantatic fic!

allfireburns: Wow, you really had me on a pairing I do NOT usually go for and I love the way it works with canon. Awesome!

carawj: You know how I feel about all three of these. :D Esp the Rose/Sarah Jane. And Ace/Martha and YTNW. And the Liz/Tosh is adorable and I really like it. Tosh could've done with a Liz.

livii: This is what fanfic does best, esp in Who, fill in all those gaps in canon and this is such a gorgeously filled gap. I have no problem imagining how Martha and Tom's relationship works and it's lovely seeing someone else's take.

I LOVE the Nine/Rose, it's so weird but somehow still packs a such a punch and shows NINE so well and how he needed Rose and yeah.

The Tegan/Turlough is pure cracky win, there is just no more that needs to be said. Seriously, every word of it is win. Sonic screwdriver! :D I can't wait to meet Turlough.

alligatorade: I really like the way you managed to really quickly set up where both characters are emotionally, and then how they get together is LOVELY, I love Jack's line. And the cat name is my absolute favorite part. :D

minerva_fan: I especially love the sigh of desire bit. But eeee, this is always a cute pairing! Bless Harry. :D And I love the description of Sarah's flat. :D

Heh. Thanks. Have a theory I'll wake up tomorrow and be all Liz/Tosh? Seriously? How many pain meds was I on??

thesecondevil: *snorting with laughter* This fic wins for that first sentence alone! This is hilarious! These two go so well and you've got both their voices down, it is a thing of beauty. :D

magicallaw: I LOVE this, both the idea that Martha's got this distorted view of rose and the idea that Rose wouldn't have WANTED the Doctor to treat others after her as second best.

minerva_fan:I don't have much to say here beyond this is so SWEET. :)

aberrantcliche: Hee! I love this! I feel it should happen in canon. In fact, till I see proof otherwise, it did.

gothic_veils: I have to admit I couldn't remember who Frank was at first but I really like this anyway, as much for what it says about Martha and her relationship to the Doctor.

(I feel like some sort of demented primary school teacher leaving feedback for EVERYONE but all of these are so much fun! :D

I really think you should! :D

rodlox: I love your Ten here, especially his patented 'so ALIVE' and I love her backstory and how you sketched the Time War.

The Nyssa/Master is so creepy! I assume it's meant to be, though. *shivers*

netgirl_y2k: Martha/Romana is ALWAYS FTW. I love Romana's introduction. :D

brewsternorth: I have to admit, I've not read anything with Karl in it but this is lovely.

pimpmytardis: Ohhh, this is just...He was such a good man as Professor Yana. :/ I love how so few lines manage to be quite so sad.

starletfallen: This is perfect, it manages to be shippy as hell while being exactly what we saw in canon. I can't quite explain, I just love the idea of what could've been here.

dynapink: Awww! This is SO sweet, I am really looking forward to seeing these two in canon.

stunt_muppet: ADGKJWER! Someone wrote Three/Liz/Brig! Yes! And it's AWESOME! With the ruffled and the embarassed and the stiffness, yes! And the nails. ;D Awesome. Seriously. And Liz's snark and Three's eyerolling and the Brigadier shooting everything on site. Win. :D

glinda_penguin: I didn't know either of these characters so I ALMOST didn't read this but I'm SO glad I did! This is fantastic, I love both Sam and Iris now and am quite sad this is AU. Love the Fitz and Doctor cameos too.

rodlox: Ohhhh. Ouch. In a good way, but ouch. Gah, this is so sad. I don't really know what to say, sorry. His tricking her with all that pain she's got from the Doctor, which, more ouch. Well done, though.

Karl's only in the one EDA (The Year of Intelligent Tigers), so not to worry, but do try and get that book if you can, it's also lovely.

Thanks! Turlough is a must-see, really. :D

Thanks, hon! Glad you liked them! And you will love Turlough, I'm sure of it. He's great fun (I'm surprised at myself that I hadn't written him before now!)

Seriously, SO MUCH LOVE. :D I love Three/Jo. I really hope fandom hasn't overhyped 'The Green Death'...

Nooooooooo, Tosh needed a Liz. She'd have maybe been less dead. :P

I hope I do! Am bit worried cuz I didn't in 'The Five Doctors' but then I didn't like Tegan in that either and I love her now!

Well it has an excellent title.

>I don't really know what to say, sorry.
don't apologize -- what you said, is abundant praise.
thank you, I'm delighted it was enjoyed. (sorry it was so very ouch)

*is pleased you like the Ten/Rani* :D

I prefer "creepy" to "squick" (which it would've been post-Keeper of Traken)
and I figured that Nyssa'd be careful and caring, even if he wasn't a burn victim.

thank you.

thank you. my Rani muse appreciated my effort - but not as much as she appreciates your praise.

Heee! People enjoying pairings they don't usually go for is one of my favorite things ever, so I'm really glad to hear that. Thank you!

Glad you liked it. As soon as this thing popped up I thought, I'm going to throw in Susan/David. I was halfway through writing it when I checked back and saw you'd requested the pairing. What great timing! :)

Glad you liked it. :)

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