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doyle_sb4's Ten/Donna: oh, just, BRILLIANT. Exactly right post-ep eeee, flailyhands, here. :D

magicallaw's Ten/Romana: lovely and evocative, especially the bit about what she could be counting. :)

carawj's Ace/Martha: perfect use of the YTNW, and the despair, and now, the hope. Love the pairing.

minerva_fan's Jo/Harriet Jones: adorable! Never thought of that pairing before. :)

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livii.

This was an absolutely lovely glimpse at their relationship. And I adore how you incorporated the TARDIS key.

I've told you what I think but I have to say it here as well. That was just lovely. I can so picture Tom proposing and it made me grin like an idiot.

That was really cute.

I love, love, love stories where Martha meets the Master before she actually meets him, heh. This was just great.

livii's Martha/Tom: That fic just made me more confident 'shipping them! Absolutely lovely!

gothic_veils' Martha/Frank: Oh how nice was that! I had forgotten how much I loved their scenes together, so thanks for reminding me.

Edited 2008-05-21 20:48 (UTC)

doyle_sb4: This made me laugh so very hard, and the voices are spot-on.

carawj: Love the contrast between the grim events of the Year and the hopefulness of the 'real' world. And, of course, Martha and Ace are brilliant together.

minerva_fan: I never would have thought of this pairing, but it works beautifully. Harriet and Jo are so cute together!

magicallaw: Actually hopeful Ten/Romana post-war fic? Yay! And it's just sad enough to work.

allfireburns: Oooh, intriguing! I love Martha's thought processes, and how she sees the Master before she knows who he is.

alligatorade: That was very cute, especially the end - Romana would be a cat person, too.

minerva_fan: Aaw, Harry. :D Very sweet!

magicallaw: I love how you wrote Rose and Martha interacting, and I adore "hello, I guess".

allfireburns: This is just brilliantly done; creepy and plausible and very good.

magicallaw: so cute!!

stunt_muppet: BLESS, they are so adorable, and I love love the use of time travel. Lovely work.

aberrantcliche: what a great pairing; I want to see them off exploring!

stunt_muppet: Oh they're adorable! And he so would go and make sure she's ok. And her reasons for staying are brilliant.

minerva_fan: Aw, *pets Harry*. Harry/Sarah FTW - this is just so sweet!

magicallaw: I really love everything you have them saying to each other here. And “You’re shorter than I expected.” is fantastic!

doyle_sb4: As always, you have their voices down perfectly. Also just the right level of complete and utter adorableness.

aberrantcliche: Hee! These two should so do this! and I like the bit about the shuttle.

Edited 2008-05-22 18:48 (UTC)

... *meep*

glinda_penguin has written up a storm. It's so rarely we get a Zoe-POV fic, and to point out the whole 'past is another country' culture clash, and the way Isobel becomes the gatekeeper to Zoe's understanding of it, so well...

thesecondevil: oh, this is so awesome - so in character and the idea of Donna and Duggan is like ♥ ♥ ♥ AWESOME. Bucket of something INDEED.

doyle_sb4: too damn adorable; I love those two together, so much.

livii: Ooh, I like the construction of this! It's bizarre and poetic and works very well for the pairing. And I really love the sun theme.

thesecondevil: Eheheheh! I am dead from the funny and awesome of both the pairing and the fic itself! Brilliant Donna voice especially.

carawj, your Rose/Sarah Jane (http://community.livejournal.com/whoniverse1000/2951.html?thread=12935#t12935) drabble was made of love.

thesecondevil: First off: Ross lives, yay! Very sweet, and I love the last line.

carawj: That was lovely. I love your version of alternate-universe Sarah Jane, and how Rose's experience with her in the 'real' world affects their relationship.

aberrantcliche: I really want this to happen onscreen. :D

gothic_veils: I love fic that pairs Martha with secondary characters, and this is a perfect example of it. Nice work!

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doyle_sb4: Both your Ten/Donna and your Gwen/Rhys are lovely! :D As someone on here already said, you always get the voices just right.

magicallaw's Ten/Romana: Oh, God, how I loved this, let me count the ways. It's so short but it manages to conjure up so much and I love the ood of it. (*not very articulate, sorry*)

thesecondevil: Eeee! OMG, how adorable is that?! :D Just lovely! Of course Ross lives!

minerva_fan: This is so lovely and sweet, I can actually really see these two working well together. :)

stunt_muppet: Is it ok if I got nothing beyond AWWWWWWW ad infinitum? Cuz this is just so....awwww. And you have both their voices so well, especially Jo's and just...awww. Thank you. :)

(I have read a few of the others but not all and I've loved all I've read so far and I will leave FB here but later cuz I have to leave the house at some point. :P)

silly_cleo: Aww! I haven't seen any of the Sarah Jane Adventures, but I love the way you used Maria as an observer/narrator here - her shocked tone is so perfect!

minerva_fan: eeee Barbara/Ian! They're so articulate even when they're drunk. :)

rodlox: The backstory you created for the Rani during the Time War is intriguing, and I love the Doctor's hesitation right at the end. Nice work!

netgirl_y2k: Ha! The last line's beautiful, and I love how this manages to be poignant and funny all at once.

brewsternorth: I've never read the EDA in which Karl appears (spacing out on the title at the moment), but this was an excellent fic anyway, especially the Doctor's last line.

dynapink: oh, I love this; it's a little hard and a little happy and just right for the two of them.

stunt_muppet: again, like I said - the fingernails. Brilliantly brilliant.

pimpmytardis: This is sweet and sad, and a pairing that works perfectly but that I'd never have thought of. Nice work!

starletfallen: I love the sense of what could have been here, the sense of potential between them.

dynapink: Oh, so sweet! Nice portrait of the post-Daleks' Invasion Earth, too.

rodlox: An interesting take on what might have happened on Traken - very sinister and foreboding. :)

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stunt_muppet: Totally and fantastically brilliant!

minerva_fan: Aww! This is adorable in the extreme.

livii: I have seen a lot of Tegan episodes, but no Turlough yet, but now I really want to! Fantatic fic!

allfireburns: Wow, you really had me on a pairing I do NOT usually go for and I love the way it works with canon. Awesome!

carawj: You know how I feel about all three of these. :D Esp the Rose/Sarah Jane. And Ace/Martha and YTNW. And the Liz/Tosh is adorable and I really like it. Tosh could've done with a Liz.

livii: This is what fanfic does best, esp in Who, fill in all those gaps in canon and this is such a gorgeously filled gap. I have no problem imagining how Martha and Tom's relationship works and it's lovely seeing someone else's take.

I LOVE the Nine/Rose, it's so weird but somehow still packs a such a punch and shows NINE so well and how he needed Rose and yeah.

The Tegan/Turlough is pure cracky win, there is just no more that needs to be said. Seriously, every word of it is win. Sonic screwdriver! :D I can't wait to meet Turlough.

alligatorade: I really like the way you managed to really quickly set up where both characters are emotionally, and then how they get together is LOVELY, I love Jack's line. And the cat name is my absolute favorite part. :D

minerva_fan: I especially love the sigh of desire bit. But eeee, this is always a cute pairing! Bless Harry. :D And I love the description of Sarah's flat. :D

thesecondevil: *snorting with laughter* This fic wins for that first sentence alone! This is hilarious! These two go so well and you've got both their voices down, it is a thing of beauty. :D

magicallaw: I LOVE this, both the idea that Martha's got this distorted view of rose and the idea that Rose wouldn't have WANTED the Doctor to treat others after her as second best.

minerva_fan:I don't have much to say here beyond this is so SWEET. :)

aberrantcliche: Hee! I love this! I feel it should happen in canon. In fact, till I see proof otherwise, it did.

gothic_veils: I have to admit I couldn't remember who Frank was at first but I really like this anyway, as much for what it says about Martha and her relationship to the Doctor.

(I feel like some sort of demented primary school teacher leaving feedback for EVERYONE but all of these are so much fun! :D

rodlox: I love your Ten here, especially his patented 'so ALIVE' and I love her backstory and how you sketched the Time War.

The Nyssa/Master is so creepy! I assume it's meant to be, though. *shivers*

netgirl_y2k: Martha/Romana is ALWAYS FTW. I love Romana's introduction. :D

brewsternorth: I have to admit, I've not read anything with Karl in it but this is lovely.

pimpmytardis: Ohhh, this is just...He was such a good man as Professor Yana. :/ I love how so few lines manage to be quite so sad.

starletfallen: This is perfect, it manages to be shippy as hell while being exactly what we saw in canon. I can't quite explain, I just love the idea of what could've been here.

dynapink: Awww! This is SO sweet, I am really looking forward to seeing these two in canon.

stunt_muppet: ADGKJWER! Someone wrote Three/Liz/Brig! Yes! And it's AWESOME! With the ruffled and the embarassed and the stiffness, yes! And the nails. ;D Awesome. Seriously. And Liz's snark and Three's eyerolling and the Brigadier shooting everything on site. Win. :D

glinda_penguin: I didn't know either of these characters so I ALMOST didn't read this but I'm SO glad I did! This is fantastic, I love both Sam and Iris now and am quite sad this is AU. Love the Fitz and Doctor cameos too.

rodlox: Ohhhh. Ouch. In a good way, but ouch. Gah, this is so sad. I don't really know what to say, sorry. His tricking her with all that pain she's got from the Doctor, which, more ouch. Well done, though.

Ten/Donna, Romana/Ten, Ace/Martha, Jo/Harriet

Martha Jones/Tom Milligan

Martha/Tom

Jack/Romana

Martha/Master

Martha/Tom & Martha/Frank

Ten/Donna, Ace/Martha, Jo/Harriet, Ten/Romana

Martha/Master, Jack/Romana, Harry/Sarah Jane, Rose/Martha

Martha/Master, Rose/Martha, Jo/Three, Mickey/Jenny

Three/Jo, Harry/Sarah, Rose/Martha, Gwen/Rhys, Mickey/Jenny

Zoe/Isobel

Donna/Duggan, Gwen/Rhys

Nine/Rose, Donna/Duggan

Rose/Sarah Jane

Ten/Ross, Rose/Sarah Jane, Mickey/Jenny, Martha/Frank

Ten/Donna, Gwen/Rhys, Ten/Romana, Ten/Ross, Jo/Harriet Jones, Three/Jo

Jo/Sarah Jane, Barbara/Ian, Rani/Ten, Martha/Romana II, Eight/Karl

Susan/David, Three/Liz/Brigadier

Liz/Professor Yana, Donna/Martha, Susan/David, Nyssa/Master

Three/Liz/Brig, Barbara/Ian, Tegan/Turlough

Martha/Master, Liz/Tosh, Martha/Tom Milligan, Nine/Rose, Tegan/Turlough, Jack/Romana, Harry/Sarah

Donna/Duggan, Rose/Martha, Barbara/Ian, Mickey/Jenny, Martha/Frank

Ten/Rani, Nyssa/Master, Martha/Romana, Eight/Karl, Liz/Professor Yana, Martha/Donna, Susan/David

Three/Liz/Brigadier, Sam Jones/Iris Wildthyme, Ace/Master