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Much love for many fics 1/3

[jedi-penguin.livejournal.com]

I've been procrastinating on my feedback, which is stupid because more and more terrific ficlets keep getting posted. Woe. If I don't give a specific shout-out to you, the chances are still good that I really enjoyed your story. That said, these ones deserve special mention:

doyle_sb4 Donna/Ten -- the voices are perfect! "On what planet does one kiss count as consummating a marriage? Planet Disney? Cinderella World?" in particular had me chortling for quite some time.

silly_cleo Romana II/Leela -- this is gorgeous. Romana's insecurities, hidden behind her office but always present, play out incredibly well in this story. She finds herself hardening as she freezes and as she hardens it feels as though parts of her are cracking. God, this is beautiful. And somehow, you have managed to express in twenty words exactly what the BF plays were trying to say over the course of almost twenty hours. Great stuff!

thesecondevil Romana II/Mickey -- fun, and oh so very Mickey. The last line is particularly terrific.

amaresu Hex/Peri -- This was everything I hoped for in the request. A light, fun and frothy follow-up to "The Veiled Leopard." Thank you for writing this!

Charley/Mel -- I've told you twice before, but third time's the charm. I adore this. Mel deserves so much more of a happy ending than Glitz could give her, and Charley deserves everything. I'm delighted by this vision of them finding happiness together.

carawj Harry/Martha -- Awww.... I LOVE your Harry! Stumbling, and sweet, and a dinosaur long before he turned twenty. Of course Martha would fall for him!

Donna/Sarah Jane -- I've always been a sucker for awkward morning-after stories, and this one's great. Sarah Jane going into "mum mode" with a woman that she slept with while under the influence brought a huge smile to my face.

Liz/Tosh -- I have a huge fondness for Liz Shaw, and you've captured her to a tee. Her cold put-down of Jack, her awesomeness in saving the day and her cool acceptance of an unconventional relationship ... I approve of it all. Great stuff here!

Ace/Ten -- Ow! Oh God, this hurts. And is beautiful at the same time. But mostly, ouch. (In a good way...)

Rose/Sarah Jane -- I'm not stalking you, I promise. I just ran up a mental list of stories I wanted to review and had no idea how many of them you'd written... Anyways, I really enjoyed this one. The gentle teasing ("Don't mock an old woman") and the caring mutual support both won me over to a pairing that I wouldn't have believed before you tackled it. Mostly I love how this is about two women who actually have far more in common than the Doctor, and how his absence allows them to discover that about themselves.

Ten/Tosh -- I can SO picture this! You have Ten's voice down perfectly, and you're right, he'd love Tosh. I am now firmly in denial of the season finale; THIS IS CANON as far as I'm concerned.

Re: Much love for many fics 1/3

[amaresu]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked the Hex/Peri. It was rather fun to write.

I kinda want to do an expanded version of the Charley/Mel one, but I'm not sure I could pull it off. I've never written anything longer that a thousand words or so.

Again thanks.

Re: Much love for many fics 1/3

[silly-cleo.livejournal.com]

Wow, thank you VERY much, what lovely feedback! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D

Re: Much love for many fics 1/3

[carawj.livejournal.com]

OMG I love you! This is some of the best feedback EVER and it totally made my week! Thank you so much, and I'm glad you enjoyed the fics! :D

Re: Much love for many fics 1/3

[jedi-penguin.livejournal.com]

Hurray! I'm so glad that the feedback made you happy, because I certainly got an awful lot of enjoyment out of your stories. I was really quite surprised when I realized how many of my favorites had been written by the same person and was a bit concerned that I might come across as more of a stalker than a fangirl.... *laughing*